Wednesday, May 14, 2014

Sentence corretion from paper one.

Original sentence-
When started ridding when I was five years old, I fell off and hit the dirt many times, sometimes with the horse landing on top of me or stepping on me.

Fixed sentence-
I was five year old when I started ridding horses. I fell off and hit the dirt many times, sometimes with the horse landing on top of me or stepping on me.

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