exercsie drafting paper #3

What was the experience you had and why was that at least as important as an "in School" experience?
Learning to ride a horse and growing as a person while doing it. It is just as important as a "in School" learning experience because you learn more about yourself and how to have compassion for something that cannot care for itself.
Who is your audience?
Students
Why should they care about this?
They should care because learning to ride a horse teaches you to have such inner strength and to conquer something you never thought possible.
 What will they, their children, or society in general gain or loose?
Once someone learns to ride a horse they learn compassion and feeling for something that cannot care for itself. that kind of compassion and caring allows people to be much more kind to others, therefore allowing people to be a kinder society.
Reasons they should agree?
Reason #1 Because  Allows you to understand how caring for others is an important quality in life
Reason #2 Because It teaches responsibility
Reason #3 Because it allows you to conquer a fear and something you never thought you could do.
Reasons they might not agree?
Reason #1 No, Because Horses are to dangerous
Reason #2 No, Because Horses are do not show love back or appreciation for what you do for them.
Reason #3 No, Because learning to ride a horse cannot impact your life in a bigger way, its not an important skill
Answers to their possible objections"
Because #1 Horses can be dangerous if you don't learn how to properly treat them and you need someone to teach you.
Because #2 Horse are living creatures and show love to the people that care for them. you are able to love them back
Because #3 Learning to ride is a big accomplishment and a lot goes into it.  it can profoundly change your life.